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Inseparable, Even Unto Death (PG-13)
by calenlassgreenleaf.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [None]
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Sat May 05, 2007 9:41 pm
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| Beautiful sentiment and symmetry. I would expect as much: ponderings, if not second thoughts. Very close to the characters, I think. (Formatting-wise, I'd delete those oOo's throughout... on first glance, I thought they were literally saying, "Oooh!" right in the middle of a serious poem. Kinda threw me off.) |
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Care to Ride My Hot-Rod Fell Beast? (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 16]
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Mon Apr 30, 2007 12:12 pm
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ghettoelleth said
You are so not well .
This from the Utumno author! Ha! But I'll take it as a compliment just the same.
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O, Cruel Fate (PG)
by greywing.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [Silliness, Mildly Evil Healers, Shirtless Elves]
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Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:23 am
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| Here, kitty kitty. Classic stuff! |
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O, Cruel Fate (PG)
by greywing.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [Silliness, Mildly Evil Healers, Shirtless Elves]
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Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:11 am
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| I am absolutely digging this, and I'm not usually a fan of anatomical-mix-up stories. Handsome indeed! |
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Bells Are Ringing (For me and my Mal) (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [mild language, violence]
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:13 am
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| Excellent. I could totally hear Mal saying all of it. You write like Whedon. Oh, yes. |
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I'm Your Pain When You Can't Feel (G)
by RobinKa.
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:43 pm
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| Finrod the generous, to the end. What an excellent piece of show-not-tell writing. You've shown clearly his generosity and nobility of spirit. So clearly that I could see in my mind's eye that scene from the Silm, even though it's been a long time since I read it. And because of your drabble, I recall how much passion and pathos I felt for the characters. Thank you so much. |
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Too Close to the Fire (R)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [sexual content]
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:32 pm
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| Oooooooh! First, I am thrilled to read new stuff from you. Second... wowie. This is scorching, Al. You are a masterful smut writer, you know that? I am in awe. And Feanor here is very very rowrrr. Very. |
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Nobody's Hero (PG-13)
by NoctiliaValida5.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Implied Death]
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Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:52 pm
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Wow, Ginny comes of as a cold bitch in this piece. I kind of like it, though it makes me sad. I suppose that's what war can do to a kid.
Much as I enjoyed this little read, though, it was not without hiccoughs. A good proofread would quickly uncover oopses that really hinder the readability of the story (such as major verb tense inconsistencies, and things like "She had prepared my own little speech" .
"Cracks in the concrete..." -- You really need some quotation marks here to show that her speech is beginning. I thought this transition was really confusing.
Best luck! |
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Cursed Commitment (G)
by Alassante.
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Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:41 am
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| "And what of your loyalty to me?" ... No kidding! How difficult for a mother to watch all her children leave forever. And this mama had a gift of foresight, so she must have known what hell they were going to. You've captured all of that in this drabble. *applauds* |
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Blameless (G)
by FatiferousPoet.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Touches on current story plot]
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:47 pm
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| Excellent! I can imagine that Claire would worry over this loss, even among all the others she is faced with. She seemed to hold her unexpected friendship with Zach very closely, and then it was just snatched away. Please write more Heroes stuff! |
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