Reviews by Elentari

Don't Panic! · Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:57 am

Boz, this was yet another delightful treat. The thought of Penny fancying Boromir... Oh, I can sooo see the poor boy thinking so. And we all know, she did give him reason to, right?
The riding lessons were priceless. I congratulate you in yet another fabulous chapter.

Return to Middle Earth · Tue Feb 17, 2004 8:18 pm

Loved the politics. Loved mindspeak intrigue. Loved wily/sweet thranduil. Loved loved loved legolas.
characterization is darn near perfect. The fic stood at the edge in the first few chappies because of the excess of 'accessories', so to speak, but you have pulled it off very well. Thank you for the time and trouble. LOVE it.
did I mention I love it? Cool smiley face

Peace At Last · Mon Feb 16, 2004 6:17 am

I think it was a great story. It's a very sweet thing, that the noldor went to Imladris after Elrond left. I figure he missed Elrond?

Love in a Time of Fading · Sun Feb 15, 2004 9:23 am

I read this before on HASA and absolutely loved it. It's very good (except perhaps that I, being a romance-addict, should have liked to see the wedding. The fic kind of jumps from courtship from marriage life. It's still incredible, though)
But if you forgive me, I shall make one humble suggestion.... Surprised smiley face

ops: I'm not very comfortable with it, but hell.

meldaya: (Quenya) my love // Meldaya, pitya nénuya: (Quenya) My love, my little lily
The Quenya sufix for 'my' is 'nya', not 'ya'. Ya does not really clarify who owns what. so it should actually read:
Meldanya// Meldanya, Pitya Nénunya.

that was it. Great work Very Happy smiley face

Of Gold and Wood · Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:25 am

Cannot believe I haven't reviewed this piece before. My humblest apologies. I think I saw this one at HASA before, not quite certain. Anyway, I have to take off my hypothetical hat to you- it's bloody near perfect.
Bow smiley face

I particularly enjoyed the way the characters behaved. It shows they are not made of ice, and that they do have passion and desire like everything else under god's sun, and the restrain and gentleness of their actions mesmerized me. I also loved the way you brought to life a little known character, and I am utterly infatuated by the Noldorin prince. (Lack of personal life, I know.... damn those elves Cool smiley face

)

I should also congratulate you on making a Silm fic that is understandable for people who did not actually read the Silmarillion. The problem (If the Silm lovers will forgive me saying that) is that there are so many characters and plots and actions and stuff that one may get lost in the book. The fic brought those characters closer without falling in the trap of too much details or complexity. It is very simple- and trust me, simple *is* good. It's bloody fantastic, actually.

The message is carried on with grace, depth, and simplicity. the characters are believable. The plot is credible- it reminds me oh so much of things like first love, first kiss... Heart smiley face

In short- A wonderful story. Congratulations. whether you carry the series on or not (which I hope you do Very Happy smiley face

) this piece can stand alone, because it's so awfully great.

At Last · Wed Feb 11, 2004 9:41 am

Using Pip as a link was a great idea. And I cannot blame any single breech on canon, which is amazing, because it's so well drawn. i loved the prequel, and this one is promising to be an isntallment of the same quality. Congratulations to both of you. Cool smiley face

Don't Panic! · Tue Feb 10, 2004 10:52 am

Absolutely hilarious. I do not think I shall recover from having gandalf call Pip a 'Nincompoop' anytime soon. And the scene when Penny was telling Mireth about the hunks around her: PRICELESS! And precisely the reaction any given lass would have, too (I myself am nerly her age, and would probably do the same.
Though, I do wear contact lenses, and would be absolutely blind without them, too. SO I hope that, if a vortex sends me to ME, it at least let me grab my glasses first. Or else I might even meet legolas and not be ableto describe him later- which would be a total shame. Twisted Evil smiley face

Absolutely brilliant honey. thank you ever sooooo much. you made my day.

The Cursed Queen of Angmar · Sun Feb 08, 2004 10:19 am

Bravo!!!!

Don't Panic! · Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:47 pm

Anna said
>
> I love that Erestor got embarresed when he found out about the real reason to Pennys "ill-ness". Laughing smiley face

Yeap. I was crying with that one. dear god- my parents think me crazy enough as it is....

Don't Panic! · Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:39 am

Balrogs.... ROFL smiley face

Brilliant! Simply brilliant! Hon, it`s getting better and better. Thank you ever sooooo much for taking the time and trouble for this. Love you. seriously.

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews by Elentari