Reviews by Elentari

The Eve of Battle. · Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:30 pm

ditto. Eomer is darn hot in this drabble (not that he isn't all the time, just sayin').

Bravo.

The Cursed Queen of Angmar · Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:24 am

I am sorry to wave The Witch King bye bye. It's been an amazing ride, rich and bittersweet. I have very rarely been so awed by a character, and this one just simply blew me off from chapter one.
I can't find a flaw in this fic. If there is one, I overlooked it. Great canon, ambientation, characterization... everything is amazing.
Thank you.

Tongues of Gondor · Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:05 am

Marta, that was extremely helpful of you. It's always good to see a writer rising up with constructive tidbits that will help us others. I appreciate the though as much as I commend the product- that was very well done.

Mercy · Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:05 pm

They are both so very CLUELESS!
Hmmm. The only thing I can think of that you could improve is that they seem to speak way too plainly of their feelings. RL people would be a tad more subtle even if it is a cleaning of slates kind of thing. We just don't bare ourselves like that.

Well, I suppose very stressed people may throw caution to hell sometimes.

I am properly impressed by your characterization. Bravo.

Regretful · Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:01 pm

Oh my. I must confess that I was quite taken to the fanon myth of a happy marriage. yet you portrayed the character beautifully. Her loneliness and self-deprecation are palpable and touching.
I wish you'd tell us what happened when she came into the room.
(her being more concerned with the trinkets than her husband was quite a telling touch. yet it's his own darn fault, isn't it?)

At Last · Sat Jan 08, 2005 12:58 pm

The fifth chapter just knocked me off. Holy cow, girls! You made him leave her there, standing alone. It was so f** brilliant. Heck. I'm envious. It's brilliant.
I'll leave now before the drolling ruins the keyboard. Bravissimo.

The Lord of the House of the Golden Flower · Fri Dec 24, 2004 9:33 pm

Alwasy a good thing to have a bit of Glorfindel.
Great weaving. Nice story. characterisations as, of coruse, gorgeous.

The Story of my Life · Fri Dec 24, 2004 9:29 pm

Wow.

that was below the belt. way below.

Simple and impossible sweet. I commend both the idea and the excecution. your insight on Aragorn's final farewells also were very real. I can all but see young Eldarion trying to look like a tough man as his ada is saying goodbye to life.

Oh hell. need a handkie.

The Cursed Queen of Angmar · Fri Dec 24, 2004 2:06 pm

KhazarKum
fantastic, as usual. I feared for a while that RL had gotten you in her evil clutches, but no (thank the Valar.)
I never ceases to amaze me the depth of the feelings you could draw in those canonically evil characters. The love and the commitment from Both the Witch King and Herumor are fascinating. The kids are growing up nicely, too.
Two thumbs up, and still your willing slave.

Take the Little Ones · Fri Dec 10, 2004 3:35 pm

Fantastic job Sw. I wondered sometimes about erestor, if he had a lover.... but I never thought of him as a dad.

I must concur with ellisk. If you could someday show us what happened to those little elves, we'd love it.

A very powerful piece, simple and touching. bravissimo.

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