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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [104]
Reviews [83]
Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
Mon Nov 15, 2004 2:32 pm
I read chapters 48 and 49. Very well done. I look forward to the next one. Thank you.
 
 
The Fifteenth of January (PG)
by GypsieRose.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Tue Nov 09, 2004 10:03 pm
Way too short, and you left us hanging. Other than that, a job well done. You capture the essence of the battles and the thoughts of those about to embark upon them. Thank you for sharing this, it is truly a wonderful piece.

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The Eagles (G)
by HollyTook.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Nov 08, 2004 5:04 pm
Another good poem. More steady, meter-wise. I felt slightly adrift in the middle two stanzas, but still, it was a good read. There is a typo in the second one. it should be its. Otherwise, thank you.
 
 
Elendil's Blessing (G)
by HollyTook.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Mon Nov 08, 2004 5:00 pm
Wonderful! Beautifully lyrical in its prose. I loved this. It is gut wrenching in its anguish. In this, you truly show your mettle. Thank you very much. Drunk smiley face
 
 
Aftermath of Moria (G)
by HollyTook.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:55 pm
Very good imagery. It tells a lot of the emotional turmoil experienced after Gandalf's fall. But, again, I find the meter is off. It varies from one stanza to the next. It may just be me, but I feel like I have stumbled. Kinda like not seeing a step in front of you, and trying to catch yourself. Still, a nice poem. Thank you for sharing.
 
 
Precious Gollum (G)
by HollyTook.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:50 pm
Evocative, but a little uneven, meter-wise. The imagery was good, but I had a little trouble finding a rhythm. However, thank you for sharing, it was a good read.
 
 
You in Your Small Corner (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [9]
Sun Nov 07, 2004 6:32 pm
Great job. A truly wonderful story. I find that I do not have much I could add to what has already been said. Thank you for sharing. Drunk smiley face
 
 
Fresh Fire (G)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [None]
Fri Nov 05, 2004 2:46 pm
Hey, a third. I thought it was very nice. Very discriptive. It conveys a new beginning very adequately. You have no need to worry.

Thank you for sharing it.

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My Heart (NC-17)
by Terri.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:55 am
Just add my thoughts to all the others. Good story, but needs more space, needs to spread out. I hope by the time I have read it, you will have considered this. Thank you for sharing.
 
 
Spiders, Wargs, and Wights! (G)
by sheraiah.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None, really]
Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:03 am
Great story. I loved it. Thank you!

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