Reviews by Rous

Comfortably Numb · Thu Jul 15, 2004 10:24 am

Very nicely done. It confused me at first, just like the dream would. Then I had to slowly come to the realization that it was not all a dream. I am not sure an Elf would say 'sure as hell', but I am certain that they had phrases that would match some of ours. Since we cannot write a story in its entirety in Elvish, we must rely on modern vernacular, to some extent. I have read the phrases "Valar" "By Elbreath" and "By the Valar". Did they really say those things? Who knows. I really think it is the emotion behind the words that is important. Thank you for a very nice piece.

The Sacrifice of Soldiers · Sun Jul 11, 2004 9:32 pm

Impressive. I really enjoyed the 'fluff', and I like fluff, but there was an underlying lesson. Train up a child and he will always come back to the training. Elrond took the patience and love to create the man who would inherit Middle Earth when the Elves had withdrawn. I would love to see more little lessons. I am sure you could come up with enough to keep us in popcorn for quite a while. Thank you.

Reflection · Fri Jul 09, 2004 6:21 am

I must admit to vast confusion at first. I figured out the Elrond part, but it was the other person. Was it Aragorn? But that made less sense. Then I read your author's notes. I jumped into the story from the featured story segment. It makes so much more sense now. And it is a very good study in contrasts. I have often wondered if long term is better than short term, whether dealing with death, illness, or even as you have, loss. The suffering cannot be mitigated either way. And you have managed to convey a great amount of emotion in such a short piece. Thank you.

Cry No More · Wed Jul 07, 2004 5:45 am

Reread this. Still very nice. Would like to see more. Thank you.

Thranduil's Bargains · Tue Jul 06, 2004 5:55 am

Finally read the update. So far, so good. Still is lacking enough chapters. I will wait somewhat patiently for more. Meanwhile, the popcorn gets cold.

Dance · Tue Jul 06, 2004 5:32 am

I reread your poem. Moved me as much as before, but noticed a tense error. "danced we did under the moonlight" should read 'dance we did'. A small thing, but thought you would like to know. Still a wonderful vision. Thank you.

Marriage of Souls · Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:32 pm

Okay, you gave away too much in the summary. Had it figured out by the second paragraph. But it was still a very good piece. I am not sure an animal would really have felt quite those emotions, but it did add to the build-up. Definately deserves a toast and a bucket of popcorn.

Black Diamond · Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:20 pm

What they all said. It was a very good look into Gimli's character. I have not read many that deal with him specifically, but this one is a keeper. Thank you. Drunk smiley face

Turning Of A Page · Sat Jul 03, 2004 12:31 am

Oh, my. That moved me to tears. Seriously. (Do not tell BB). That is one of the best pieces I have ever read, bar none. I cannot express how it moved me. I am...speechless. (And for me, that is saying something). Please, please, write a return missive from Aragorn. You have captured the essence of an old man remembering his youth even as he nears the end of his life. It was the epitome of eloquence and poetry, moving with a flow that defies the gravity of the situation. I must quit before I run out of ways to praise. Thank you. Thank you very much. I offer a toast to your creativity and ability to weave such a moving story.
Drunk smiley face

And you deserve so much more.

Butterfly-Cocoon · Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:17 pm

I am so happy you like it. I will have to be honest, I have no idea where this is leading. I am as surprised as anyone else. It does not help that my muse spends large blocks of its time drunk or passed out. (It seems I forgot to lock the liqueur cabinet. I am missing copious amounts of Buttershots). Havetoist suggested I send it to AMA; I am opting for MAA. Much stricter program. Anyway, I wish I could tell you what is up with Haldir. Currently I am about 154 pages ahead of you all, and it is getting interesting. Sorry if it seems slow to some, but I am going more for the everyday doings, than the guts and glory and blood and male bonding thingy that moves most. So, if you can stand the pace, thanks for reading.

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