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Nobody's Hero (PG-13)
by NoctiliaValida5.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Implied Death]
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Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:46 pm
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While a nice concept, I find the reading hindered by the verb tenses. They jump back and forth too often and upsets the equilibrium while trying to figure it if is then or now. And, if Harry is dead, then this can hardly be Bookverse and should be A/U. Just my thoughts on the subject.
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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Sweet Memories (G)
by PipMer.
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Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:16 pm
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This is sweet. A nice gap filler. You tied the ending in very well, also.
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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Tealeaves in the Garden (PG)
by SoundofHorns.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 1] Warnings [none]
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Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:24 am
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The concept is interesting, but I cannot read it. You need to separate your paragraphs. It is overwhelming to even consider reading this after looking at it.
I would like to revisit it, but only if you do some editing.
Hmmm, seems after reading your bio that you jumped on, joined and published on one day and have not been back. Since you probably will never see this, I guess a review is kind of moot. |
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Last edited by Rous on Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:28 am |
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Apologies (PG-13)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [implied sex]
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Wed Oct 21, 2009 10:33 pm
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Nice. I miss the series. It died a death too soon.
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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Monophobia and Flooded Dark Tunnels (PG-13)
by DarkElfChilde.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [language]
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:05 pm
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Do not know much about the game, just from the movie. This is pretty good, but would benefit greatly from a beta. There are some grammar issues.
Overall, not bad.
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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Single Godlike Male Seeks Companion (PG-13)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [sass]
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Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:03 pm
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*snicker*
A welcome read to return to. |
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Mating Season (NC-17)
by Eyborg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Smut]
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Sat Oct 17, 2009 4:05 am
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It came out very decent. 'Nuff said? 
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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The Surrender (G)
by Halfwest.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:17 am
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Oh, very nicely done! The flow is impeccable. The rhyming is not forced and it all works so well. I have only one question:
Both night and day are treasons against each other’s truth;
In this line, are night and day "treasons", or "treasonous"? If the former, then well enough. If the latter, a better phrase might be:
Both night and day wage treason against each others truth.
Over all, a very nice read and much better than some that I am forced to read on a poetry site.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Butterfly-Cocoon (PG)
by Rous.
Chapters [22]
Reviews [ 72] Warnings [Pretty much G-PG for violence]
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Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:03 pm
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| Thank you. I did not realize anyone was still reading this. |
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Faoi Dheireadh (PG-13)
by batsojopo.
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Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:15 am
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So far, this is interesting. I am anxious to see how you handle their finally reaching their goal.
I do feel the need to point out that you have some typos and a few grammatical errors. However, with the scope of my own stories, I know that it is virtually impossible to catch every one.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for sharing.
rous |
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