Reviews by Rous

What do I say? · Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:13 am

Just a quick note to say that this is still touching. It is good to revisit these stories from time to time. I was glad to see it featured. Still strikes a chord.

Breath · Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:08 am

Nicely written. Glad to see this featured. I would have regretted missing it. (Is that possible?) Very Happy smiley face

At any rate, thank you for sharing.

I don't wanna miss a thing. · Sat Jun 03, 2006 6:35 am

As this was featured, I feel compelled to comment again. Nothing has changed here. As a matter of fact, re-reading it has only added to the confusion. There are parts that just do not jive with the actual events of the story. Therefore, this is still just a song with a bit of narration. Neither the song or the story are enhanced by each other.

Of Fathers and Sons · Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:29 am

Read again. Still swayed by how poignant this is. Nice to see it in the featured box.

Board Games (Cinquain) · Wed May 31, 2006 1:35 pm

I have written quite a few based on nature, but I wanted to try these based in the LOTR world. So far, it is an eh. Too many do not know what they are. Kind of like drabbles at another site I post to.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Both are greatly appreciated.

The Strangling Ring · Wed May 24, 2006 1:01 pm

Nice imagery, but I feel the meter is off; it makes it hard to stay in rhythm. Thank you for sharing.

Journey's Delay · Sun May 07, 2006 9:48 pm

What a wonderfully twisted tale! I love it. So much promise, only to be thrust in another direction. And, the imagery was spectacular. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

White Gull From The Sea · Thu May 04, 2006 2:49 pm

A good attempt, but I feel that it was too bereft of details and action. A good story needs paragraphs that each tell a part of the story. This was just too empty. Your characterizations and the narration were both stiff. In all honesty, I could never buy the storyline to begin with. Possibly re-writing would help. It just lacks something. It is a good effort, though. Thank you for sharing.

Fun with Farm'n · Wed May 03, 2006 8:04 am

Ugh! This is great. And through the horror, humour shines. Love the touch.

Cuivië · Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:17 am

What a wonderful glimpse into the awakening. Very well written and handled. Such a great interpretation. Thank you for sharing.

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