Reviews by Duchess

Deceptive Chances · Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:05 pm

Loved it! Legolas fics are my weakness and you've catered to that nicely, thank you. *vbg*

Why aren't there more reviews here than this? I'm confused, it's a fine tale and worthy of feedback.

Anyway, I love stories that have such sweet, happy endings. *contented sigh* This one is going on my recommended reading list! Smile smiley face

A Gathering of Friends · Mon Apr 05, 2004 4:12 pm

Sequel! I want a sequel! lol Please? This is such a sweet little tale and I find myself wanting to know just how Legolas and his love plan to outsmart Thranduil. *vbg*

Forgotten Allies · Mon Apr 05, 2004 3:24 pm

First of all, *stands and applauds* VERY well done! The angst factor was so high, but it was all story related and not contrived. You yanked my heart out with the last line of chapter 20, you rascal you, but I suppose that was one of the things that made this fic such a good read. *fluttery sigh*

I have to admit though, after I finished this I had to go take a nap, I was so drained emotionally and am sick physically so you tapped me out. *g* During my nap, I dreamed an alternate ending that satisfied my "happily ever after" complex that my mother has fostered in me since I was so little I couldn't walk yet. lol I won't say what it was because that's neither here nor there, just wanted you to know that when your fic is dreamed about that means it was EXCELLENT! Smile smiley face

And the Sky Full of Stars · Sun Apr 04, 2004 7:03 pm

What a sweet story! I loved it and will recommend it to everyone I know with a love of LotR fanfic.

Nicely done! Very Happy smiley face

Eternally · Fri Apr 02, 2004 8:58 pm

*screeching now* Nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Whatever you do you CAN'T let her die! Oh please? They are so perfect together!

This story is so absorbing I've ignored everything else for it this evening and nearly picked up the monitor to chuck it out the window when I couldn't access chapter 5 earlier. lol What a spell you wove with words, crafting images for the mind's eye full of light and life! To say well done is too much an understatement. No, I'm impressed, amazed and in awe.

*applauding* Bravo!

Eternally · Fri Apr 02, 2004 7:21 pm

I've read up through chapter 4 but can't access anything beyond that. HELP!!! Please? I'm riveted and can't stand not being able to access more story! *whimper* Somebody?

lol I kept going back and clicking again and again, getting page not found over and over until finally there was chapter 5! *squealing with glee* I'm gonna keep reading now. *vbg*

Something That Should Not Be, And Yet... · Fri Apr 02, 2004 5:16 pm

Beautiful! I loved it! *happy sigh*

Now I need to find the other story this one refers to. *vbg*

Storm Warning · Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:19 pm

Chapter 6 is a bit graphic, don't you think? You need to give it a hard R rating because of that, especially since it's a little three year old boy that's being beaten half to death. *shudders* I almost stopped reading right there, but I kept on because I want to see these bad guys come to a very fitting end! Grrrr They're EVIL!!!

*moving on the chapter 7 now*

I finished reading the whole thing and am glad to see that Elrond, Estel and Figwitt were all rescued, but still think the bad guys got off too easy. I like it that Vic seemed to have a last minute change of heart, but that Bono guy REALLY should have suffered more! Grrr I can see him being wounded, severely burned and surviving only to become the town freak, tormented by rotten kids for the rest of his life and unable to do a thing about it. Yeah, THAT'S what I wanted for him! *nodding emphatically*

In places your story was a tad contradictory, but on the whole it was good. Thank you for sharing it with us. Smile smiley face

To fool an Elf · Fri Apr 02, 2004 6:34 am

This is delightfully funny and I hope you can write more of it soon. *vbg* A wonderful lighthearted fic, great job! Smile smiley face

Blood Brothers · Wed Mar 31, 2004 10:32 am

Your short stories about Legolas as a child and his little servant are quite cute, but a little angsty. The bond between the two boys is intriguing, to say the least and you need to write more, to show the young Prince's recovery now. Smile smiley face

I'd like to offer you some advice on the use of some words, such as "stridently" You used it when the queen was pulled aside, but it doesn't really fit there. An online dictionary will tell you it's meaning so that next time you can use it properly. There are other words that I have doubts about your use of, but that one stuck in my head more than any other.

Please do continue to write, you show great potential. *vbg*

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