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The Journey (R)
by batsojopo.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [ 60] Warnings [mild violence, sexual situations, character death]
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Sat Aug 07, 2004 9:49 am
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That... was a little abrupt. I don't understand how she can go from barely being able to WANT to go to the gardens alone to traveling in the wide scarey world again in just that short a time, but you'll explain that later in the fic I guess.
Liked the part where Estel snuck into Arianel's room to visit with her. *g* |
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The Journey (R)
by batsojopo.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [ 60] Warnings [mild violence, sexual situations, character death]
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 11:15 am
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Tease!
I'm glad Haldir found her and brought her back and she was unharmed, but I really do still want you to update us in story about where Legolas is now. Please? |
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All for the Ones I Love (PG-13)
by karushna5.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 9]
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 11:03 am
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I'm sooooo glad you saved him with that move by Illuvatar! *huge sigh of relief as I fall across my desk* Sheesh you had me worried there for a bit!
Mean/sneaky of you to post that preview like that. LOL Looking forward to reading it at some point, hopefully soon. 
Sorry I've been absent, family members going into the hospital right and left is a major distraction, don't you agree? *tired and worried sigh* |
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New Beginnings (NC-17)
by redlexus01.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [strong sexual content, possible violence]
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:17 am
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| Okay. Thanks for clearing that up. does this mean you're gonna go back and rewrite the beginning eventually? |
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The Bond (NC-17)
by Thuriniel.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 92] Warnings [Explicit sex; AU]
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Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:04 am
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Elven wedding with a twist? Please don't let it be an interruption at least, okay? I'm with Nargalen and Legolas, if Eliwen calls things off again it will be the LAST straw and anyone else who tries to stop the wedding should be SHOT, mutilated, drawn and quartered! *emphatic nod*
I liked the bit with Gimli, nice touch. |
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Captured Heart (R)
by Maeluiril.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 64] Warnings [mentions of child abuse]
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Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:03 pm
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Aw, what a LOVELY ceremony! I adored it and thank you kindly for writing that all out for us. *happy sigh* Too beautiful!
The funny commentary was delightful as well. *vbg* |
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The Fair-Haired Ones (PG)
by saborice.
Chapters [13]
Reviews [ 8]
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 9:48 am
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*shaking my head* It did? I must have been very tired when I read that, because I saw mildly. lol
There are still quite a few misused words though. Don't you have a beta? I'm sure if you go to the forums and ask, someone will volunteer. It will help your story flow better, so I really do recommend it.
Now I'm the LAST person to tell someone that have to adhere strictly to Tolkien canon, (crossover writer myself) but I do believe it takes a good deal longer to get from the Shire to Minas Tirith than a few short days. Also, if Sam had traveled all that way, he wouldn't leave at the gates, but go on inside and see his old friend Strider aka Aragorn, don't you think?
Anyway, you act as if you're in an all fired hurry to get through this story and are going so fast with it, why? Slow down a tad and take a little more time, that will make it better, honest it will. You have a very interesting premise and this could be really great, don't be in such a rush. Okay? |
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Captured Heart (R)
by Maeluiril.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 64] Warnings [mentions of child abuse]
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 9:01 am
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Awww, I'm so glad he responded like that to her, too sweet and you just about made me cry! *contented sigh*
Boy howdy has Haldir come a looooong way in his attitude towards someone touching his baby girl. *giggle fit* Almost never thought we'd see the day. *snickering*
Thank you for your consistently good writing on this most excellent story! |
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The Fair-Haired Ones (PG)
by saborice.
Chapters [13]
Reviews [ 8]
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Thu Jul 15, 2004 7:41 am
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Um, I wouldn't describe Aragorn's love for Arwen as "mild" at all. *shaking my head* Sweety, do you have a beta who could help you with misuse of words like that? *curious*
I'm also puzzled as to how Legolas knew Veronica's name. You said yourself she's only been in the land for two days, so how could he have heard of her already? There aren't that many travelers coming out of the Shire at this point, are there? *confused*
You might should have shown some reaction on Veronica's part at reading that Legolas was in the book and she'd just met him, don't you think? I'm surprised you didn't.
Anyway, this is still cute and you will only get better if you continue to write, like most people, so do please write more? |
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The Fair-Haired Ones (PG)
by saborice.
Chapters [13]
Reviews [ 8]
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Wed Jul 14, 2004 4:49 am
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I'm glad you made her dress for the location. *g* I'm sure that jungle maiden feels VERY stupid right about now, twising her ankle without even running away from something that's trying to kill her. LOL
So, she's in the woods and falls backwards...into whose arms? Wondering if it's Legolas and hoping so. *vbg* |
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