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Reviews by SilverMoonLady

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Journey's Delay (PG)
by LadyAranel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Thu May 06, 2004 12:03 pm

How incredibly evocative! Wonderful use of words and images, very well done! What a lovely surprise Wink smiley face

I look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
 
 
The Horn of Gondor (G)
by Cadiliniel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [Death is the subject!]
Wed May 05, 2004 7:51 am

That was lovely, a very nice look at the shattering effect of Boromir's death on those of his kin and his people. You may want to reread aloud for a few word omissions, but otherwise technically neat (and that counts in my book). Very nice, particularly amidst the overflowing excess of "Denethor the crazy and cruel" nonsense!
 
 
Scattered Leaves (PG)
by Aratlithiel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [9]
Warnings [Dark/Nightmarish]
Fri Apr 30, 2004 4:16 pm

Wonderfully painful and heartbreaking. I stand in aweSmile smiley face
 
 
Estel (PG)
by Viv.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [15]
Thu Apr 22, 2004 9:59 pm

Simply lovely! What a marvelous and beautiful little gem! Thank you for that glimpse Very Happy smiley face
Watching and waiting for more Wink smiley face
 
 
A True Dwarf (PG)
by PoweroftheBook.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [17]
Thu Apr 22, 2004 5:30 pm

Lovely! Very Happy smiley face I have nothing to compare it to, there is so little written about Gimli and dwarves in general, but this really worked! I'll be watching for more!

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If... (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:53 pm

Smile smiley face That was very beautiful! Iam so glad you are bringing your poetry to us, you have fine ear for emotive imagery.
 
 
A Hole Possessed (G)
by Marta.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:49 pm

Oh, envious heart, so long thwarted!

Very nifty!Smile smiley face
 
 
Enlightenment (PG)
by Tinni.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:49 pm

Very interesting, and very different. I must however second Viv's mention of the distracting typos. Would you like me to help you edit that? I would be happy to, since I really do think both your style and subject are exceedingly good. PM or email me if you want a hand Smile smiley face

SilverMoonLady
 
 
Adventures in Baking (PG)
by Stupidcat.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [9]
Warnings [None]
Mon Apr 12, 2004 8:37 am

Very Happy smiley face Laughing smiley face Very fluffySmile smiley face Unlike the pie in question. Ah... well, we can't all be perfect, but you've given this pair a lovely little moment; I like how playful you made them.
 
 
Pilgrim Hat (G)
by Halfwest.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Sun Apr 11, 2004 4:14 pm

Very Happy smiley face Neat! I'm not much of a poet, but I liked the subject matter quite nicelySmile smiley face It's always the little things...!