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Journey's Delay (PG)
by LadyAranel.
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Thu May 06, 2004 12:03 pm
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How incredibly evocative! Wonderful use of words and images, very well done! What a lovely surprise
I look forward to seeing more of your stuff. |
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The Horn of Gondor (G)
by Cadiliniel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Death is the subject!]
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Wed May 05, 2004 7:51 am
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| That was lovely, a very nice look at the shattering effect of Boromir's death on those of his kin and his people. You may want to reread aloud for a few word omissions, but otherwise technically neat (and that counts in my book). Very nice, particularly amidst the overflowing excess of "Denethor the crazy and cruel" nonsense! |
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Scattered Leaves (PG)
by Aratlithiel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Dark/Nightmarish]
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Fri Apr 30, 2004 4:16 pm
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Wonderfully painful and heartbreaking. I stand in awe |
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Estel (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 15]
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Thu Apr 22, 2004 9:59 pm
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Simply lovely! What a marvelous and beautiful little gem! Thank you for that glimpse
Watching and waiting for more  |
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A True Dwarf (PG)
by PoweroftheBook.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 17]
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Thu Apr 22, 2004 5:30 pm
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Lovely! I have nothing to compare it to, there is so little written about Gimli and dwarves in general, but this really worked! I'll be watching for more!
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If... (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:53 pm
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That was very beautiful! Iam so glad you are bringing your poetry to us, you have fine ear for emotive imagery. |
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A Hole Possessed (G)
by Marta.
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:49 pm
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Oh, envious heart, so long thwarted!
Very nifty! |
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Enlightenment (PG)
by Tinni.
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 2:49 pm
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Very interesting, and very different. I must however second Viv's mention of the distracting typos. Would you like me to help you edit that? I would be happy to, since I really do think both your style and subject are exceedingly good. PM or email me if you want a hand
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Adventures in Baking (PG)
by Stupidcat.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [None]
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Mon Apr 12, 2004 8:37 am
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Very fluffy Unlike the pie in question. Ah... well, we can't all be perfect, but you've given this pair a lovely little moment; I like how playful you made them. |
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Pilgrim Hat (G)
by Halfwest.
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Sun Apr 11, 2004 4:14 pm
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Neat! I'm not much of a poet, but I liked the subject matter quite nicely It's always the little things...! |
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