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Brothers at Heart (PG-13)
by Radbooks.
Chapters [26]
Reviews [ 27] Warnings [None]
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 11:45 am
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| Very promising beginning. I like it. It is interesting how a human raised by elves would feel about "plain" humans. Looking forward to an update! |
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To Become a Queen (PG-13)
by Madeleine.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 18] Warnings [highly annoying brothers]
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Sat Dec 03, 2005 5:02 am
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As always your stories are a delight to read.
I found this part particularly insightful: "She had heard it in the first light of dawn when the people of Minas Tirith, after a night of fear and desperation, had already given up hope. At that moment she had not fully understood the meaning of that sound, could not have known that it meant deliverance." Referring to the battle, but also to her current situation. Very clever and amusing to say the least. Good stuff. I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
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Salt and Sweet (G)
by NancyBrooke.
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:52 pm
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| Excellent. A touching look into the bitter sweet nature of immortality |
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Waiting (G)
by domeair.
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:20 pm
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This drabble raises a lot of questions, such as "what is Legolas doing at a hospital?" Is this a modern day fic? I'm a bit confused. Maybe you should make a story out of it to explain things more thoroughly. Right now there's a lot of questions left unanswered and they distract me from truly apreciating the theme of the story. The feelings of the distraught wife when her husband is injured is a very compelling theme, however.
You are definitely on to something interesting here.
Sirannon |
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Last edited by Sirannon on Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:05 pm |
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The First Age of the Sun: Triumph (R)
by inglor.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 20] Warnings [Warfare, character death, adult situations]
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Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:24 am
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| This is a really great chapter. Very nicely written. I can't help being in awe of what a task you have taken on. I can't even pretend to know the ramifications of such a change in the universe of Tolkien. Which makes it all the more interesting, of course. Can't wait to see how this turns out. |
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Of Falcons and Mûmakil (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [33]
Reviews [ 104]
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 4:06 pm
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I'm not sure what it is about this story, that makes me wait impaitiently for an update, perhaps it is that the characters feel like real persons, or perhaps it is your fluent use of the english language, I don't know. What I do know is that I am anxiously waiting for another update. I can't keep from wondering how such ill tempered characters will manage to rule the kingdom of Rohan.  My compliments for a well thought out story so far. |
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Lothíriel (PG-13)
by Frigg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [None to speak of]
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 8:07 am
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First I would like to say that this is a really sweet story. Seeing Eomer torn between his sense of duty and love is nice. However I can't stop feeling that you may have rushed their relationship a bit at the beginning. How did they emotionally come from being introduced to eachother to Lothiriel asking Eomer to think of her when he rides to battle? I think you should have been a bit more expliicit in that part bof the story Oh by the way Amrothos is a hoot.  |
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Imrahil's Daughter (PG-13)
by Madeleine.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [none]
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Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:27 pm
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My compliments. You have created a really well thought out enviroment and above all it is funny! It is extremely rare that I laugh out loud when I'm reading something, I did just that several times while reading your story.
Keep up the good work! |
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Last edited by Sirannon on Mon Aug 29, 2005 2:40 am |
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Rides a Pale Horse (NC-17)
by Emmess.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 14]
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Mon Apr 04, 2005 2:42 pm
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| I agree, that this story shows promise. Just a couple of things, though. The king of Rohan is spelled Théoden. Also it seems a bit fuzzy to me, how Amaryn can reach Haldir in time from the hallway, seeing that Haldir is at the absolute front of the batlle. Also being a book reader mostly I'm not sure whether Éowyn and Amaryn would know of the ringbearer and his mission. I'm sure people more familiar with the movie could answer that. After those nitpicks I'll just say that it is a well written story and that I look forward to the next chapters. |
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Twilight of the Gods (PG-13)
by Katzilla.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Violence, Tense Situations]
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Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:40 am
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Great story! I like Aragorns character development. It is also nice to see Lothiriel as a capable Queen. Maybe Aagorn should let Arwen be the negotiator, she seems to have a talent for diplomacy..
Anyway, nice story - lots of suspense. Is it only me or does anybody else think of the Israel-Palestine conflict? |
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