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Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [59]
Reviews [ 55]
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Sun Sep 10, 2006 3:32 am
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Just caught up to chap 7, and I'm still loving it.  |
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Friendship Born of Trial (G)
by BillthePony.
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:45 am
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No reviews... Hmmm, let me fix it then 
I'm really glad to have read your story, not only because it depicts my favorite character in the entire Silmarillion really well, but also because you've managed to portray the friendship and brotherly attachment of Beleg and Turin without judging the latter, even though we all know that said friendship was going to waste due to Turin's fate and Morgoth's curse. I generally dislike him for an obvious reason, I'll be the first to admit it, and I love Beleg to pieces, but I do appreciate the voice you gave Turin, presenting his concerns, the need of revenge and his love for his mother and sister. I also like your portrayal of Beleg, with all the responsibility he carried, his wisdom forged by years of being a warden and warrior, his being proud - in a good way, his straightforwardness and will to sacrifice his life for a greater cause.
This was a nicely and gently written, insightful and thought-provoking one-shot. Thank you for sharing
Binka |
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Finding Comfort (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 4:24 am
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| This was very nicely done and it flowed smoothly, almost like a wave. I agree with Rhapsy. I liked your portrayal of Maglor and the mortal OFC, and you conveyed the sadness of their relationship, the hope and comfort they found in one another, very beautifully. Thank you for sharing |
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Dance of Desire (G)
by ellie.
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 2:48 am
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| I agree with Rhapsy. This was such a nice, heart-warming little tale of a boy who wants to be a warrior like his father and older brother. Such a cute picture you painted here. I'll have this warm feeling all day long. Thank you for sharing |
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The true meaning of sport (G)
by Aearwen.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [total silliness,]
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 2:19 pm
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Oh my...!
A stroke of comic genius!
LMAO!
Thanks... for... sharing...!
LOL!
Can't stop laughing  |
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Yearning (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:58 pm
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| Very touching and sweet. I like it Thanks for sharing |
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One Night (NC-17)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [Bad Language, bawdiness, sexual activity.]
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:40 am
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Oh my! This chapter was hilarious! The singing contest was the best way to break the tension I can't stop laughing, LOL. Oh those naughty Riders and mischievous twin gals
“Then does his Highness have one in mind?” Blithe asked, turning to study the prince now seated at her side.
“Know you one called ‘Roll Your Leg Over’? My cousin has enjoyed it on previous occasions.”
“Some verses,” Bliss replied, looking at her sister, “though we by no means know all of them.”
“There must be a hundred, at least,” Blithe chimed in.
And so on...
Thank you for a good dose of laughter early in the morning.
Looking forward to the next part |
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Requiem (PG-13)
by Rhapsody.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [Angst, character death, grief, battle scenes]
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Thu Sep 07, 2006 6:19 am
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I can admit that I was thrilled when you told me that you would update this story. Yes, I've been waiting for another chapter and now, when it's posted, I am in awe once again.
This chapter is special, I feel, and it's quite a surprising one. You portrayed Orome beautifully and with gentleness. He feels responsible for both Celegorm and Huan, and he wants them to come back without the burden of grief, yet he knows it's a tough task to achieve.
I find this line particularly moving: Understanding is mine, yet again as his master; I will prepare him for his righteous part in the music now that his feä is no longer astray.
This was an excellent chapter. I cannot wait to see the next one.
Again, bravo, Rhaps! |
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The Touch of His Hand (PG-13)
by ellie.
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:19 pm
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| Very subtly and beautifully written I really love the way in which the healer described Haldir as a brother, warrior, commander, and a husband. This was a touching, gently told tale. Thank you for sharing |
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One Night (NC-17)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [Bad Language, bawdiness, sexual activity.]
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:00 am
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I knew you were up to something... But you lulled me into a false feeling that nothing wrong would happen, by providing an excellent scene in the tavern. I've got a clear picture of the crowded room in my mind: people drinking, laughing, jesting etc., Morwen and the other women carrying tankards. I just loved the scene with Eomer's companions, LOL. “He speaks again! We must have a toast!” Háma said, holding his tankard aloft. *giggles* Well, well, those twin gals guarantee a lot of fun.
Then, the talk between Morwen and Flocwyn. I like Folcwyn very much, she seems to care about Morwen and is concerned about what is going on around.
I'm eagerly looking forward to reading the next chapter. Please, don't make us wait too long!
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