Reviews by FatiferousPoet

Loss (Drabble) · Fri Nov 10, 2006 5:51 pm

This was really good. Bravo!!! Excellent capturing of emotional turmoil and endless longing. For all the wrong reasons. Wink smiley face

Draco's Reflection · Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:20 pm

Wow. This is awesome! (Sorry, that's like, so non-specific... it's my initial reaction to this story). Very Happy smiley face

What a EXCELLENT interpretation of how a Death Eater becomes a DE. I really and thoroughly enjoyed this story! Very vivid and I felt like I was there. Highest praise I can offer.

I am not sure I would agree that Draco would ever come to terms in admitting calling himself to be a coward.... especially so soon, but the reflection of not finding the killings the glory he expected is very believable. The whole piece pulls it off well. Bravo!!

Thanks from the Inside · Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:28 am

This is a lovely drabble Viv! I never had thought much on what River *did* with the Bible she challenge of Book's. You have put an intersting spot light on a very scattered character and the twist of normal subject matter one finds with River is beautiful.

You did an excellent job and I applaud your verse and creativity.

Midnight Foray · Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:19 am

Greetings! The dialogue in this piece flowed nice, however - not remembering this episode, I wish there was more that explained what they are talking about. I'm making the assumption that it was him dreaming of her and perhaps intimate acts, but unfortunetly, as ST:NG hasn't aired in my house for quite some time, I fear I have no solid idea what they're referring to or why she shows up only to leave after a few rounds of speeck.

If you've seen/remember the eps, I'm sure it's well plotted out, but that is my feedback as one who does not recall. Smile smiley face

I hope you find that helpful.

Last to say, it was written well that it made me feel like I wanted more. This story left me wanting to know what on earth really happened. That's a good thing you've done in sucking in the reader's curiosity. Smile smiley face

More Things In Heaven · Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:13 pm

The dialogue in both of these pieces are well done: The pacing good and the ineractions very appropriate given the characters aned situations. I felt bad for Graham and enjoyed Riley's stance with a solider mentality/training. (I will admit however, when I read a warning of non-con sex and it opened up with two guys... I was like... 'huh?' Hehe... I take it there's a lot more to come yet, yes?) Smile smiley face

Who? · Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:03 pm

Teheheee... okay. This made me laugh. I'm not a huge Doctor Who fan, but I'm aware of it and could totally follow the overall arcing theme to this drabble. Nice!

Watch how I soar... · Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:00 pm

Very tight and together piece. I enjoyed it very much - especially the line "She's tore up plenty, but she'll fly true." It leaves me with the impression that Zoe is speaking of herself more than the ship.

Lament · Tue Oct 31, 2006 9:46 pm

Short but packs a punch. I don't wish to repeat what's already been said, (I do agree), so I will say that the word imagery is very strong. Well done.

A Father's Heart · Tue Oct 31, 2006 12:10 am

<Both babies were beautiful, but he was already partial to Leia. Even at this early stage, he could easily see Padme in her.>>

Very well toned. Bail Organa is not a character that I think on much, but he obviously plays a large role in this trilogy x2. Very Happy smiley face

I like the reasoning on why he chose Leia. Well done.

Apples · Mon Oct 30, 2006 10:20 pm

I have to admit, the comparison of a woman's hair, blooming love to ripening apples has never occurred to me. A nice, thought out analogy in this drabble.

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