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Fun with Farm'n (PG-13)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Orc humor]
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Mon Apr 24, 2006 7:05 pm
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| Good nastiness! |
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Just a Little Shove (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [OOC Balrog Slayer and Lord of Rivendell]
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Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:05 am
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| Great, Inglor! You've found another lovely plot hole and wedged it open good and proper. I love your image of Glorfindel as the practical warrior - do what's necessary to save lives: what's a little lava between allies? Do you call that friendly fire? (which I do not mean to make light of -- oops, another pun.) |
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Destiny (G)
by Ottis413.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Very AU]
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Tue Apr 18, 2006 8:39 am
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| This is lovely, Ottis. But why is it AU? Is there anything in canon that says it could not have happened? So much about it is interesting - Galadriel's way of talking that is at once motherly and aloof, your descriptions of Sam's feverish perspective, the fullness of the story. I'm glad you posted it. |
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Taking Ship (G)
by Radbooks.
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Tue Apr 18, 2006 8:29 am
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| You chose a really interesting moment to explore here, and brought forth all the conflicting and connecting elements well. This piece would be improved, however, by some judicious editing for tense, sentence structure, and format. |
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Heralded By Storms (PG-13)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 15]
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Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:46 am
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4/3/06 - Normally, it's my practice to wait until a WIP is finished before commenting, but I was so impressed in the second chapter with your expressions and similes - they are so perfectly hobbitlike, and truly reflect the natural world they live in. I also love that Saradoc is walking into a story already in progress, as it were, and discovering it bit by bit, as we are. Looking forward to more!
(I'm sure I'll be adding more here as you go) |
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Here, Kitty, Kitty (PG)
by Tindomiel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings ["mistreatment" of animals]
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Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:20 am
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Nicely played out! You took a nasty piece of an idea and fleshed  it out into a legitimate character exploration story with real teeth. |
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Gandalf's No Good, Rotten, Really Bad Day (G)
by GandalfsApprentice.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [character death]
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Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:19 am
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| A good joke! stretched a bit thin, maybe. What was Elrond doing in there? |
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One Moment (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [male point of view]
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Sun Mar 26, 2006 9:22 am
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| Excellently done, Inglor - a voice of experience, tenderness, and truth. |
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The Summons (PG)
by GandalfsApprentice.
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Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:35 am
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I love a good story freshly told and you bring a lot of nice and new perspectives to this story - Boromir's focus on the sword, and Aragorn's admiration for Denethor for example. Well done.
I'll look forward to more from you. |
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Bright Futures (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Ending]
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Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:39 am
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| Ouch! Poor B! This is a wonderful little story, Rous, with a great deal of pleasurable parts - Faramir just barging in, the soldiers' feelings toward F, that you refer to Boromir as future steward as his companions must think him ... lots and lots woven easily throughout. |
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