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Friend of The Berror (PG-13)
by xBabySx3.
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Sun Jul 04, 2004 12:53 pm
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| A very interesting and captivating idea, but your spelling's atrocious. Please! find a beta to help. |
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Not Remembered (G)
by Cadiliniel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10]
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Thu Jun 24, 2004 7:27 am
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| Very nice - slighly sinister and mournful simultaneously. Did you have a specific Arandur in mind, I wonder, or the post in general? |
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A Merry Meeting at Bree (G)
by maya.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [None]
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Mon Jun 21, 2004 3:20 pm
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| Great! Charmingly woven into Tolkien's text and with a real ear for high and lower speach alike! |
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Small (G)
by PearlTook.
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Mon Jun 21, 2004 3:11 pm
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| I thought this very nice, a little un-subtle, perhaps, but very nice. Yeah Pippin! |
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Requiem for Boromir (PG)
by maya.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [Descriptions of violence, character death]
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Sun Jun 20, 2004 3:44 pm
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| Thank you. This is a true requiem in that it brings the departed and those who loved him together again. Your verses, too, bring the lament back clearly into my mind. I think you did a good and appropriately strategic thing in not including the whole lament here, but completing it. |
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Being and Nothingness (PG-13)
by Vulgarweed.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [No happy ending, character death]
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Fri Jun 18, 2004 6:56 am
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| Ooooh! Chilling ... you have some wonderful poetic images there ("Mountains had convulsed") but also (fewer) awkward phrasings (his assumed form). I think, if you wanted, you could tighten this up a bit and make it more poetic, but that might also make it less factual and move your drabble away from the text in which it is so wonderfully rooted. Pardon the back-handed compliment - I did very much enjoy this piece. |
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Dreamcatcher (G)
by saborice.
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Sun Jun 13, 2004 2:59 pm
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| This is a nice little vignette between well sketched characters. I am, however, very confused as to when it is taking place; and I can only think you meant 'Gondorian' castle instead of 'Rohirrim'. Why is Pippin crying, exactly? just loneliness? or fear of something about to happen. I would have liked a tad more context. |
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Sleeping Beauty (G)
by Cadiliniel.
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:41 pm
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| Very intriguing! I like the feeling of Eowyn doing something risque and forbidden, but so secretive and intimate. |
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The Pyre (G)
by Cadiliniel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Slight 'death by fire' stuff.]
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:38 pm
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| Really excelent - I particularly like the frequent juxtapositions of opposites; they are very effective and provocative. |
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The Horn of Gondor (G)
by Cadiliniel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Death is the subject!]
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 3:36 pm
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| This story has lovely moments - the sound of the water, how grief is doubled, Denethor weeping into raven hair. I must say, I enjoy your compassionate and hopeful portrayals of Denethor, although they stretch canon, I think. |
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