Reviews by SilverMoonLady

More Than Cousins · Mon Jun 07, 2004 8:15 am

Interesting start. There is obviously something pretty big brewing in Merry's heart or I don't imagine he would say such cruel things to his best friend... I'm waiting *impatiently* to see where you're going Smile smiley face

Weapons of the Enemy · Sat Jun 05, 2004 10:07 pm

Nifty! I enjoyed the portrayal of Glorfindel, amused, bored, admiring, refined, and deeply ancient, all in turn well contrasted with Sam's basic straightforward 'hobbitness' and devotion. I liked it Smile smiley face

Eowyn's sorrow · Sat Jun 05, 2004 10:01 pm

Lovely! I would not have know you were not a native speaker if you hadn't said so. This was a really neat pairing and a very well written piece. The implication that he rode to Gondor knowing he would die is very powerful, especially when set against his prediction of her future happiness. I also liked the way you pinpointed the fact that she loves an idea and an end, not the man; a very important point, well stated Smile smiley face

I'll be watching for more!

Allemande · Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:53 pm

Oh wow! Very very very well done! As always, your images shine clear through the words; I can see them walking that corridor, passing through shadow and light. This is an excellent piece of dialogue that stands true to the characters and their later actions. This is going on my recommend list.

Strange Revels · Sat Jun 05, 2004 12:56 pm

Well, it seems terribly odd to *me* anyway Smile smiley face

That's why this is so completely AU and outside my world Wink smiley face

I really only did this on a dare. But to answer the question of Merry noticing, well, he most certainly did notice! And that was... exciting and pretty darn neat! (just imagine what exists about 10 inches down from your mouth and you can see why he wouldn't terribly mind the view) Between being a bit sauced and a rather adventurous soul in the first place... Well, you get the idea Smile smiley face

Well, I'm going to go home and think about this 'morning after' idea... *grin* I was just going to leave it there, but... *hops off to find a good bottle of wine*
Let's see what the muse and a well turned glass can do! Very Happy smiley face

Strange Revels · Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:19 pm

Yikes! I obviously need to fix this 'problem'! Surprised smiley face

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That's what happens when randy hobbits wander through your mind at 2 am Twisted Evil smiley face

Strange Revels · Fri Jun 04, 2004 2:35 pm

Viv said
> Oh, write their next meeting! Please! This story was scrumptious, and so believeable. I love how you write Merry. Only one thing bothered me throughout... did he ever get a chance to pee? If not, he's doubly impressive for completing an entire seduction whilst having a full bladder. Wink smiley face

Teehee.... well yeah, he was on his way *back* from that actually Smile smiley face

Any suggestions on how I can, uhmmm, make that clear? *grin*

Conflicting Wishes · Thu Jun 03, 2004 2:35 pm

A very honest look as a hard reality: war often takes more than we want to give. The drabble is a tough format to work with, but you've tackled it nicely. Perhaps another quick pass to improve the flow?
Looking forward to more Smile smiley face

Love Found, Love Lost · Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:55 pm

Lovely! Now I need to go read the story of these lovers! I'm hooked here, so sweet and sad a parting! *big happy weepy sigh*

To Remember · Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:44 pm

Very interesting idea, that more than friendship might have grown between these two; I can tell there is a great deal of feeling (from you and them) in this. Can't wait to see more.

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